My name is Tayla and I'm the Cluster Manager for the Summer Learning Journey in Kaikohekohe. I like how you've done your activity on google slides and included lots of great images and colours, it looks great!
I have however noticed that the information you have included has been taken from a website. In order to receive full points, could you please edit your post and put it in your own words.
Thanks Tristan, looking forward to seeing your work!
Thank you Tayla for the feed back I will change it up, then make it still interesting but makes more sense from me. I will try not to use any websites as much.
Kia ora Tristan, Olive here from the Summer Learning Journey! How are you today?
Thank you for your blog post! You've chosen some excellent foods for your three-week-voyage! Carrots, oatmeal and blue berries sound like very useful choices! You sound like you'd be a great survivor!
I notice you haven't been as active recently - maybe you're on holiday? Bad wifi connection? The dog ate your computer? Whatever the reason, my team and I would love to see more of your work! Don't give up, there are still two weeks of the program to go! Remember the end of the Summer Learning Journey is next Friday 24th January! Keep up the blogging, commenting and enthusiasm!
Kia ora Tristan,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tayla and I'm the Cluster Manager for the Summer Learning Journey in Kaikohekohe. I like how you've done your activity on google slides and included lots of great images and colours, it looks great!
I have however noticed that the information you have included has been taken from a website. In order to receive full points, could you please edit your post and put it in your own words.
Thanks Tristan, looking forward to seeing your work!
Ngā mihi,
Tayla
Thank you Tayla for the feed back I will change it up, then make it still interesting but makes more sense from me. I will try not to use any websites as much.
ReplyDeleteHi Tristan,
DeleteThat would be awesome, thank you :) I'll check back to see how you go.
Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Ngā mihi,
Tayla
Kia ora Tristan, Olive here from the Summer Learning Journey! How are you today?
ReplyDeleteThank you for your blog post! You've chosen some excellent foods for your three-week-voyage! Carrots, oatmeal and blue berries sound like very useful choices! You sound like you'd be a great survivor!
I notice you haven't been as active recently - maybe you're on holiday? Bad wifi connection? The dog ate your computer? Whatever the reason, my team and I would love to see more of your work! Don't give up, there are still two weeks of the program to go! Remember the end of the Summer Learning Journey is next Friday 24th January! Keep up the blogging, commenting and enthusiasm!
Ngā mihi,
Olive