Saturday, September 30, 2017

The Rough Riders (Western Styles)

WALT know the movie making process. I know that I was successful because I was a confident actor, I had an ascent and all my friends were confident. 

What I found easy was that we all played our parts in the movie and some muck around happened but at least we got it done.  Thanks to my mum that helped with the prop making and the script writing and my friends that joined in with our movie.

What I found hard was I couldn't stop laughing at some of my friends acting but I knew that I shouldn't of had laughed because that was wasting most of my time. Lucky that I got it done in time. Here is my video and I hope you enjoy. leave a comment.

Wednesday, September 27, 2017

9 Parts Of Speech

WALT know the 9 parts of speech. What I easy was that I learnt a poem about 9 parts of speech and I knew what they all were by looking at them. This here is what I have been learning to do in my class so I have created this on a google slides to help me know what the 9 parts of speech is. Also I have put in 2 examples on all of the slides to help too so I hope you learn something off this and leave a comment.

Wednesday, September 6, 2017

What would you do if you were working in a sweatshop ?

In my class we had to write a recount from the perspective (view) of a child working in a sweatshop. I chose to be a kid working in a clothing factory.

I was learning to use descriptive words and phrases to enhance the mood of fear or sadness.
I was successful because I got it done in time and I used descriptive language in my writing.
What I found easy was I knew what to right because it was all about the mood of sadness.

A Day At The Clothing Factory
On a early Monday morning I got out of bed and went to work. It was so dark I couldn’t see properly. I was so tired that I really wanted to go back to sleep but my boss wouldn’t let me. I had to stay up during the day.
Afterwards my boss came to see what the children were doing I was sewing clothes while everybody else was doing the same thing.  Nine hours later, I could smell all the nasty fumes going past me in the factory. I couldn’t stand it. I felt like I was going to faint. The other children that were in there looked sad and dirty. Kids: were wearing dirty clothing, some kids didn’t even had t - shirts or shoes just like me. When the buzzer rung all I had to eat was a bowl of rice. I only sat their for like three minutes and didn’t have time to eat my bowl of rice. So I had to hurry and shoved my rice in my face before my boss sees me.
At 11:00 pm I couldn’t stay here much longer I just needed to go outside to get some fresh air but instead of going out there I had to stay in and smell the fumes. Sew clothing and shoes,  It was tiring I just couldn’t handle those fumes.
Hours later it was almost time for me to go and have a rest.  “I don’t want to work. It’s just too hard”. Shang Wu said“But that’s the only thing you can do i’m afraid unless you have a better idea”. I replied“Huh so I guess I just have to stay here until my work is over?”.
Finally it was 8:00pm. When I walked out of the factory I finally got to have some fresh air and have some rest. “It is 8:00 pm I can finally go home to sleep”. I am so exhausted after working so hard in that factory. I want a good rest after sewing all those clothes. I couldn’t want anything more than having a good night sleep.