Monday, August 22, 2016

Term 3 Book reveiw 2016

                     Born of the year of the rabbit
I have read a book called Born Of The Year Of The Rabbit. This article is about a boy named Hua Yan and his life in China. This book was written by Peter Mirams.  

This book has a boy that lives with eight million people that is in a medium sized city which is in China. They even go to school at 8am and school finishes at 5pm.

In my opinion life in China is really difficult for them and how they are doing things. The way that they do stuff is really different than us.

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Friday, August 5, 2016

Cool Karate

Here is my first persuasive writing
Cool Karate!

I think we should have karate classes every Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays because it will keep us fit and we will be able to defend ourselves from bullies. Do you want to learn karate at your school?  Yes or no.

My first reason we should have karate classes is that you will keep fit.
For example if you go and exercise such as, running and boxing that is also keeping you fit and healthy like karate. In other words you can also play a sport which keeps your body moving just like karate but with karate it will be a life time memory. Added to this in karate classes you will do push ups that will make your muscles stronger.

The second reason we should have karate classes is so that you can defend
yourself from getting bullied. For example if someone was bullying you, You can
stand up for yourself so they will stop picking on you.  Added to this bullies are not aloud to
come near you if they do and they are going to hit you, You need to use your defence skills that you have been taught.

I summary, I think we should have karate classes every Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays. Because it will keep you safe from bullies and strangers and you will be fit for your old days when your 80.

My next steps are:
To plan my ideas well so my  main reasons have good supporting detail.
Learn and use emotive words and phrases to make my argument better
Use the correct structure and connective independently
Check that my sentences make sense.