I am learning to read with fluency and expression. I know I was successful because I changed the sound of my voice and I was talking clearly and loudly.
Hi Tristan, I am pleased with the effort you have put into reading your speech with expression and fluency. However, I am concerned that this is not a persuasive speech at all. You know what persuasive structure is. I have talked to you about slight changes that you could add to ensure this speech has an opinion, yet you are reluctant to make any changes.
Hi Tristan, I am pleased with the effort you have put into reading your speech with expression and fluency.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I am concerned that this is not a persuasive speech at all. You know what persuasive structure is. I have talked to you about slight changes that you could add to ensure this speech has an opinion, yet you are reluctant to make any changes.