Tuesday, August 27, 2019
THIS IS MY COMMENT !!!
Hi Hawaiki, my name is Tristan and I go to Tautoro school. You have a great piece of writing but what you can improve on is your puncuation, putting in fullstops, commas and captial letters in the right place. And it's "My family and I". Apart from that keep it up just so you improve more.
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