Speech Critique

Today my whole classroom stood up to say there speeches. Everyone was nervous at the time we had to stand up in front of a classroom and say our speeches. When I stood up I was so nervous I felt like sitting back down because I thought I was going to muck up the whole thing but I didn't.

The real challenging part is when you have to stand in front of the teacher and the students. Everyone will look at you while your saying it so it doesn't matter if you do it or not. My speech was about "Why bullying should stop in every school around the world." I think I did alright I just needed to show more expression like really trying to get in there and let it out and more facial expression. But I think I did great actually.