SPORTS VS MUSIC !

This is my writing assessment. I am learning to write correct simple, compound and complex sentences and proof read my writing.

I think I am good at using simple and compound sentences.

My next step is to use more complex sentences in my writing assessment to make my scores higher.

SPORTS VS MUSIC

I think sports is more important than music because sports can be a better lifestyle.

Agree to disagree ?

First reason why I think sports is more important is nagging and slouching. Sports is good and healthy for you, you know why ? Because every time your playing sports it keeps your body moving. For an example,  if you played soccer, that game is supposed to move your legs by running and kicking. If you were listening to music you would be lazy because you're so into music that you don’t want to do anything or move anywhere. So for you I reckon that you need to put your device away and get moving.

Second reason why I think sports is more important than music is to lose those devices. Music can be a habit to almost the whole world, especially america. They have all of the gadgets. But sports is everywhere in the world, you can play it at anytime. Music maybe sometimes. What I want and to you, is don’t hear what other people are saying to go ahead, and listen to all those new boring songs. Go ahead and play a sport just so you know what it feels like being out there with friends.

Last reason why I think sports is more important that music is what they all mean.Sports and music all mean something like music is relaxing but sports is more movement. So if you're willing to take music than go with it. I’m just saying we should all play sport just like other people will. I know most of you will rather go with music but that’s not the case. What i’m trying to say is play a sport it’s good for you and your lifestyle when you’re a grown up.

In summary, I think that sports is more important than music because it gives you a better lifestyle. Do you agree to disagree ? Sports means everything to all of you so am I but i’m willing to say stop listening to that appalling music and let’s play sports !