I have been learning about 3 different sentences. This will help me in my writing and proof - reading skills. I had to make a digital learning object to show others what I have learned. What I have found hard was the tool that I was using took forever but I hope you enjoy it.
Hi Tristan, you worked so well to complete this. I am proud of you. I have a few suggestions. Slow down some parts. Also, you left a word out when you were explaining the dependent clause. Let me know if you fix it up. Keep up the focus in class.
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DeleteHi Tristan, I'm Hilary from Room Hauraki in Te Waka Ako from Waikowhai Primary School. I liked how you tried to use proof reading in your writing. It reminded me the first time my teacher told me to proof read my writing. I'm glad that you are working on your proof reading, but have you thought about proof reading your statement/reflection?
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Hi Tristan.I'm Alex from room Hauraki in Te Waka Ako from Waikowhai Primary School.I really liked how you to use proof reading in your writing. It reminded me of the time my teacher taught me about proof writing.I'm that your working really hard on your proof reading.Have you thought about proof reading your statement or reflection?
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