How I can make Tautoro school exciting.

Term 3 Book reveiw 2016

                     Born of the year of the rabbit

I have read a book called Born Of The Year Of The Rabbit. This article is about a boy named Hua Yan and his life in China. This book was written by Peter Mirams.  

This book has a boy that lives with eight million people that is in a medium sized city which is in China. They even go to school at 8am and school finishes at 5pm.

In my opinion life in China is really difficult for them and how they are doing things. The way that they do stuff is really different than us.

              

Cool Karate

Here is my first persuasive writing

Cool Karate!

I think we should have karate classes every Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays because it will keep us fit and we will be able to defend ourselves from bullies. Do you want to learn karate at your school?  Yes or no.

My first reason we should have karate classes is that you will keep fit.

For example if you go and exercise such as, running and boxing that is also keeping you fit and healthy like karate. In other words you can also play a sport which keeps your body moving just like karate but with karate it will be a life time memory. Added to this in karate classes you will do push ups that will make your muscles stronger.

The second reason we should have karate classes is so that you can defend

yourself from getting bullied. For example if someone was bullying you, You can

stand up for yourself so they will stop picking on you.  Added to this bullies are not aloud to

come near you if they do and they are going to hit you, You need to use your defence skills that you have been taught.

I summary, I think we should have karate classes every Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays. Because it will keep you safe from bullies and strangers and you will be fit for your old days when your 80.

My next steps are:

To plan my ideas well so my  main reasons have good supporting detail.

Learn and use emotive words and phrases to make my argument better

Use the correct structure and connective independently

Check that my sentences make sense.

My Term 3 Goals

Waka Hoe term 3

Here is my Te Reo DLO

The Best Day Playing Rugby.

Monday 20th June 2016
Playing Rugby

“I am learning to add figurative language and synonyms for said into my writing

On Saturday my uncle and I went to Ohawai to play rugby. We went against Keri Red. The first thing I did was go to my coach to get a t-shirt. My coach gave me a shirt and I put it on.

Next we went onto the field to do a little bit of training and exercises until the game started. We even did a game plan, but one of our players wasn’t listening. We didn’t care we kept on going.

 The game started. We were ready for the kick off, so they kicked it off to us. We caught the ball and we ran into them like a herd of bulls. One of us knocked a boy from the opposition’s team over and he cried hard out like his arm broke.

After that, we scored three tries and they scored five. Shortly after I heard one of the Keri Red players breathing hard it’s like they were angry I was like, “holy heck” I wondered why are they breathing hard. Then they ran really hard at us some of us were crying except for me and some other players.

A few minutes later they had scored 2 more tries we only scored 1 trie. Finally it was game over the score was 7 points to 4 so we went to our coach and I took my top off and put it in the coach's bag.

Later on we went into the room where they give their player of the day awards and have something to eat. The people in the kitchen were cooking the food for us they were preparing the food on the table.

Then the the food was placed on the table. Then it was time for the player of the day awards I wasn’t that excited because anyone can get it but soon I heard one of my players say,” It’s gonna be Tristan”, In a squeaky voice. My coach told me to go up to him and shake his hand. So I got my reward from him and then I took my reward to my uncle.  I felt as tall as a sky tower. I also had a feed but I only ate a little bit.

My favourite part of that day is when I got that reward because my dad told me if you get that reward then you get 1 hour on playstation. I will never forget that day.