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Tuesday, March 15, 2016
Bike Accident .Draft 2 what I need to work on. I need to work on is using a variety of interesting words and phrases in my story
At home I fell off my bike
On Sunday I was getting my bike because I was going to 6 laps from our house to our auntys house. Then my brother wanted to race me to the white house.
So we were getting ourselves ready to race we grabbed our helmets and we put them on our heads.
Next we were getting on our bikes. Then my brother came over to us. He was the one who said on your marks get set and go so my foot quickly leaped off the ground and went onto the pedals and I quickly spun my legs around. My legs were spinning as fast as a wheel on a car going down a hill. It was so freaky. I thought my legs will get chopped off by the chain spinning. I was so fast that I couldn't stop. I pressed the brakes down as hard as I could. And I just stopped before I went of the kerb.
/So I went for it but something really bad happened I was turning the corner then I went to the next corner and guess what happened? the back wheel slid and it bumped the barn and the wheel came off so my dad had to fix it up for me so I can ride it again.
Later on I looked down. Blood was pouring out my knee like a red river. My mum and I hurried to the tap at my Nan’s house. Then I jogged back home to get a bandage it was really sore I felt like my leg was gonna fall off.
Finally I had some dinner it was delicious it was pork bone with potato and kumara. After that I went for a good night sleep. On that day I learn’t not to go to fast on my bike again.
Thursday, February 25, 2016
My book reveiw
Slam Dunk
Three days ago I read Slam Dunk. The story was about a boy named Patrick and the Coach Williams. The text is written by John Lockyer and the illustration was by Andrea Bianchi .
I liked the the part when he was with another boy named Karl Morrow. Even there was a tall man with big shoulders and thick eyebrows standing by the door. I liked when he was playing basketball with the new boy named Karl he was an amazing player he had good skills he was moving side to side he was dribbling the ball but then he stopped dribbling the ball Patrick was very nervous because he can lose the ball.
Tuesday, February 16, 2016
Navigating My Class Site
This is my literacy three, When I am on literacy three I choose what I want to do. I do this well I am not with the teacher.
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