Plastic bags are the worst things in the world !

I am learning to use language features of persuasive writing. I know I can write emotions and some rhetorical questions because I used some in my persuasive writing that I wrote here.

My next step is to put more rhetorical questions and emotions in my persuasive writing and also to make it more interesting for my readers so they are interested in my writing.

To be successful I will:

Use rhetorical questions to make my writing interesting
Use emotive language (words about feelings/emotions)

Plastic Bags

I think we should keep plastic bags and polystyrene out of New Zealand.

First reason you should have a look at plastic you think that plastic is good but it is the worst because it is made from petroleum.Petroleum is petrol that is made from a factory. You can’t let it fly away to your pets because it can cause danger towards animals by eating it wouldn’t that be heartbreaking. Also if you drink petroleum you will die, the petroleum is from underground too.

Second reason if you put any food in with polystyrene the bad stuff from it will go right into the food and when you eat it you will die. Do you want that to happen to you ? For an example, you could drop some chips in and you pick it up and eat it then all of the chemicals will already went into the chips you’ll never know if it is going in because you can’t see it can you.

Another reason is that the worst one you won’t believe is polystyrene, polystyrene is a dreadful chemical that can kill people and animals. You have a look when you open boxes or something there could be polystyrene in their.They look like little round white balls that you might just find in the boxes that you have. Do you know what these little balls can do to you ? .

In summary, I think we should keep plastic bags and polystyrene out of New Zealand.

Do you know what integers are well this is where you are going to find it

I was learning to know what integers are and to learn about positive and negative numbers. What I found hard was I didn't know what it mean't and what it was actually about. Then I got it and made myself a presentation about integers. It is short too.

Do you like plastic or polystyrene because if you do you've made a bad choice

I was learning to plan for writing using brainstorming, discussion and lists.

what I found easy is I was researching the words that I didn't know and getting started with help from my teacher Whaea Lana.

I think we should keep plastic bags and polystyrene out of New Zealand.

Firstly you have a look at plastic you think that plastic is good but it is the worst because it is made from petroleum, Petroleum is petrol that is made from a factory. You can’t let it fly away to your pets because it can cause danger towards animals by eating it and also if you drink petroleum you will die, the petroleum is from underground too.

Secondly if you put any food in with polystyrene the bad stuff from it will go right into the food and when you eat it you will die. For an example, you could drop some chips in and you pick it up and eat it then all of the chemicals will already went into the chips you’ll never know if it is going in because you can’t see it.

Another reason is that the worst one you won’t believe is polystyrene, you have a look when you open boxes or something there could be polystyrene in their it looks like little round white balls. You might just find it in boxes that has came from mail.

In summary, I think we should keep plastic bags and polystyrene out of New Zealand.